Friday, August 19, 2011

Can you tell me what you think of this writing?

It's good to incorporate some depth in writing. But too much of anything is, to put it frankly, bad. Here, you use a little bit too much depth. If you wrote a whole story like this - you'll lose the reader after the first paragraph. This belongs in a diary. Thoughts to yourself. Not reading material for the public.

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